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Nnadi Samuel’s Eclectic Gaze
Illustration by Charles Owen / THE REPUBLIC.
the ministry of arts / books dept.
Nnadi Samuel’s Eclectic Gaze
As I read Nnadi Samuel’s ‘Praise for the Inner Lining of my Morphing Apparel’—the poem that opens his new chapbook, Nature Knows a Little About Slave Trade—I was reminded of ‘Song of Myself’ by Walt Whitman. In the 24th section of the 1892 version of the poem, Whitman writes: ‘Through me forbidden voices, / Voices of sexes and lusts, voices veil’d and I remove the veil, / Voices indecent by me clarified and transfigur’d.’ Whitman’s lines, where he uncovers, liberates, and unapologetically accepts desires that are culturally censored as taboo, are ‘transfigured’ in Samuel’s poem into stranger figurations and subtler associations. The self-glorification of Samuel’s speaker is rendered with an ironic tone, so eloquently confident that it seems immune not only to judgment but also to the physical risks of social nonconformity: ‘I: asphalt glory. / Color riot, in ways that put coffins out of fashion, / snithe the threading to come clean as shorelines.’
Considering the epigraph of the poem comes from Francisca Coker’s short listicle on social policing, particularly on dressing culture across many communities across the world, the poem that follows reads like a fiery vocalization of an imagination that desires the Whitmanian freedom. A kind of freedom that is both shamelessly and decisively individual, a freedom so utter in its boundlessness as to satisfy even the most ‘harmful’ sartorial tastes: ‘My sternum aches for harmful collars, for tough cravats. / Each knit: a riffraff defying strangling.’ However, the speaker’s political, religious, and cultural state is capable of neither tolerating nor accepting this sort of self-expression.
SAMUEL’S POETIC SPECTRUM
Across the poems in Nature Knows a Little About Slave Trade, Samuel takes on an acreage of serious subjects—from language, trauma, violence (cultural, historical, universal, and domestic), social policing, immigrant reality, childhood to slave trade. But, as the eponymous poem intimates, it is not thematic range alone, but also a command of poetic language and its various modalities that is the locus of Samuel’s claim to distinction. For one, the poem, which closes out the book tags history to resonate the dehumanizing violence of slave trade while impressing a thorough sense of trauma through a personal perspective rendered in insinuations charged with universal overtone:
Memories haunt the glassless frame.
I peer at it long enough to sculpt Pa towelling the piled bricks.
Each whack a violence rummaging where beauty would later touch.
The not enough-ness of dust, surrounding us like cruel jinns.
If the title of the poem, ‘Nature Knows a Little About Slave Trade, implies an ironic juxtaposition between the natural world and the human brutality of slavery, then the ‘not enough-ness of dust’ surrounding the labourers like ‘cruel jinns’ evokes the omnipresent yet often unacknowledged spectre of death and suffering that haunted enslaved people. The simile is particularly apt because in Islamic mythology as inherited from pre-Islamic lore, Djinns are as living and morally diverse as our awareness of our human and physical existence. However, in all their supposed existence, through myths and theology, they live in the fantastical dimension. Although they are real in those realms, they are incorporeal—or at least invisible to us—to the point of comfortable disregard on our part. So, it is through the deeper paradoxical insinuation of the simile that the poem creates a palpable sense of the oppressive atmosphere and the constant threat of violence, both physical and psychological, that permeates the harrowing history of slavery.
The final lines—‘A decorum next to slavery / it demands your Negro hands’—further reflects the dehumanization inherent in slavery, its cynical, utilitarianist reduction of individuals to their labour value and racial identity. The ‘decorum’ ironically refers to the systematic brutality of the slave trade disguised as a civilized economic system. Through the visceral imagery and fractured narrative of the poem, Samuel forces us to confront the raw, lived experience of this brutal moment in our social and political history and its corresponding dread. He challenges us to see beyond sanitized historical accounts and recognize the enduring impact of the traumatic legacy of enslavement.
Despite the concentration on these heavy motifs, Samuel is still able to write about reminiscences as delicate, emotional, and nostalgic as childhood adventures with proportionate clarity. For instance, in ‘A Boy Ago’, although intimating youthful recklessness alongside immersive playfulness, Samuel’s recollection offers several statements where love and a brotherhood built around mutual protection are clearly recognized as cornerstones of a fulfilled childhood:
If I’m worn out, he troubles the water on my behalf.
If he is spent, I win the tide to his side
and we both race to satisfaction,
else this longing burns out.
Yet the poems—with the noted exception of ‘Praise for the Inner Lining of my Morphing Apparel’ and ‘A Boy Ago’—are also compartments of ornamental repetitions. In ‘A Wreckful Planting of Small Pockets of Thirst’—a poem in which the speaker tries coping with a profound sense of ‘grief’—for instance, the second stanza is essentially a shorter or more compressed version of the fourth just with different figurations. His initial struggle with emotional inarticulation echoes across the poem towards romantic frustration, in content as well as in effect.
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No sooner had Samuel achieved precise expression through unusual, though fascinating, association of words and verbal craftsmanship than his poems began to court an air of superfluousness. His initial skill—exemplified in lines like ‘as I hold you urgent, behind clenched lips, / a sharp susurration tilling its underbrush’ and his adroit use of anthimeria in ‘If he says boy, I metaphor it as a palm soothing the first ache’—gives way to excess. This excess divests the poet of control over his creative engagements and their ability to meet poetry’s crude aspiration towards refined representation. Ultimately, Samuel sacrifices the attainment of sweeping enchantments at the requisite expense of expressive fastidiousness.
In ‘Poems Like This Refuse Sound, My Cramp Bears Music Enough’, in which the poet takes on a brutish and abusive father to verse, Samuel does not write to inform, share, or even communicate his personal or imagined history with the reader. Instead, he writes to whelm and devastate. However, the crux of this strategy, beyond its choking tendency when taken too far, is that—coupled with its dense style and ornate diction—it becomes not only long-winded but also portentous. In ‘How best to script him with the right trauma’, Samuel asks himself in the course of the poem, ‘without muddling my lap?’ But ‘muddling’ the metaphorical ‘lap’—which I take to mean his poetic introspection—is exactly what this emotionalist ‘scripting’ in part achieves.
In this poem, however, more than in any other in the book, there are as many lines to be admired as there are otherwise. In one of its memorable moments of introspective indictment of domestic abuse, Samuel’s plain confrontation of ‘Pa’ is tempered with his self-accountable candour—so curt, precise, and flawless. Its lineation, exuding newfound comfort and confidence, is nothing less than remarkable too: ‘You soil my years with vermillion blood, / and / I revel in its color.’ But the momentum reclines when the marvellous balance in those lines between the speaker’s recognition of abuse and triumphing through acceptance is counterbalanced by the sensationalist ruminations that follow, smothering on their own feckless, explicit descriptiveness. With oxymoron and paradox bleeding into confusion, we can’t seem to separate abuse from collateral damage and collateral damage from paternal responsibility:
Cuts blooming brightly from her thighs.
The sound catches
as incest in my teenage year. A ripeness so me, it takes a veggie
like Pa to reach out when no one does.
This is a rather grand attempt at a sophisticated irony. However, coupled with the balanced rhetorical questions doubling as euphemism towards the speaker’s passive yet wishful imagination in the lines that follow, the irony is rendered naive by its own self-advertising implements:
My heart skips at his footstep, or do I assume my life a
bonus track? I let the poem throw more hint on this. Say, my knock-knee is a repetition
of pardon. What then is Pa if not a misdemeanor? I unlock his palms, dream them neat
& it was.
Ultimately, the poem’s technical shortcomings conceive internal inconsistencies so damning the blasé precision of its ending not only contradicts, but also undermines much of what it proceeds. After that momentary, self-soothing dream, the speaker wakes up to the authentic real, clanking its endless note of dread: ‘Waking up . . . / The storm Lazarus my last fear.’
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Meaning, transmission of feeling, and satisfaction of narrative logic often get lost in Samuel’s compulsion to overshare, the bane of the confessional poetics of our particular tradition. Even with as sweeping and personal a subject as domestic violence, the sharper, shorter, and more precise the narration the better. Think Louise Glück’s ‘First Memory.’ Think ‘Prayer of the Backhanded’ by Jericho Brown.
In a poet that takes on weighty subjects with even weightier rhetoric, this technique of narrative over-extension is potently downgrading since the poet is not only expected to speak from memory and unfiltered imagination alone, but to marry them to discernment, each in tandem serving as his cynosure to expressive precision. One might argue that Samuel’s over-the-top narrative impulse derails his proper attention from the delicacy of technique, its resulting compactness, and precision of meaning. Nonetheless, he projects nothing but intense seriousness across these poems. After all, who else combines a remote subject to literary reification as sign language with one as local to its engagement as religion, if not an ambitious imagination? Who, at the end of ‘A Bilinguist Blaspheme in Broken Accent’, equates the sacredness of religion to that of language while alluding to John 1:1, asking by way of rhetorical tact of double alliteration: ‘Where between language & Lord does my blasphemy touch?’
From such poets as Nome Patrick Emeka to Samuel Adeyemi, the bulk of new Nigerian poetry is characterized by self-expression. Although while embedded in the same literary culture, Samuel’s temperament cannot be so provincially defined. His poetry, taken together, is an expansion of our new poetry for the straightforward but nonetheless interesting reason that he seems to have found a distinctive way of articulating his personal, if sometimes imagined, history while, at the same time, effusing their universal contexts quite decisively and seamlessly⎈
NATURE KNOWS A LITTLE ABOUT SLAVE TRADE
NNADI SAMUEL
35 PP. SUNDRESS PUBLICATIONS, 2023
UNITED STATES OF AMERICA
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